AUTUMN

Autumn is warm and you see leaves scattered around the ground.   

The strong breeze blows the leaves everywhere.

Leaves stroke against your skin and they fill people with happiness.                                                      Some leaves can be evergreen, which means they will be green as can be for ever and ever.

Leaves make trees warm like a bears coat covering you.

Dew falls from the sky and shimmers like a star.

Leaves float down like the waves in the deep blue sea.

The colour of leaves are like a rainbow that never ends.

Narrative

HUNTED

One night  a full moon  was shimmering like the sun, and there lived a Jungle boy. his tummy was rumbling like the wavy waves crashing in the morning.  *Sniff, Sniff* the Jungle boy could smell something very tasty.  he searched for the tasty smell, running through cages and climbing over boxes. Ya! he was excited when he saw it. he couldn’t wait to get his teeth on that tasty chicken. He was 2 inches away when suddenly…… crash! he landed hard on the floor! “ You are the last one of your kind,” the hunter yelled in victory.  *Click*  the Hunter suddenly blinded the poor boy with the camera flash.  When the poor boy could see again he found himself tied up, upside down.  * Chomp chomp* the hunter was just finishing his tasty chicken, making the boy sad. The hunter held out the white wishbone. “This could be your lucky day,” said the hunter. *Snap* the boy grabbed half of the white bone and won. The Hunter walked back to his hut. The boy used the wishbone to carefully unlocked the padlock. *Thump* the Hunter hit the floor when he realised what was going on. “Come here!”  Yelled the Hunter. He started chasing the boy like a fat gorilla. The boy came to the hole and was trapped. Then he had an idea. He quickly grabbed the camera flash and blinded the hunted. *click* the Hunter was blinded for 5 seconds. Rah! the boy was running hard out. He ran through the cage and waited. *dong* The fat hunter hit the cage bar and was knocked out. The next day the man woke up finding himself high up in a trap. The boy and his army were dancing and singing below him. The

jungle boy and his army lived happily ever after.

My first narrative

                                Holiday Nightmare

                                              

Once there lived two young bears. One was called Yogi and the other named Lisa. They lived happy together.

They were extremely excited……. as they were about to go on their BIG JOURNEY.  “Come on Yogi” shouted Lisa bear.

Vroom! Off they zoomed on the Air New Zealand plane. Suddenly the plane started rocking like a toy horse.

Ahh!!! Yogi bear and Lisa fell from the plane!

Thump! Suddenly Yogi bear and Lisa bear were lying on the hot sand. They looked around and noticed they were on an island. It looked very swampy. They tried hunting for food but all the could find was….fish.

Rumble!! Rumble!! Yogi bear and Lisa bear tried searching for the sound of the Rumble. Finally they found it. Ahh! they were doomed because it was a VOLCANO. They ran as fast as they could to get away from it. Behind the great big volcano was a whole lot of wooden tree houses. They were the size of a classroom. Later that day they made a perfect home in one of them.

Ahh! Little pieces of lava rock were coming out of the VOLCANO. Suddenly a lot of BIG FIREBALLS came racing out of the volcano. “Come here Lisa. Come here Yogi” echoed in the air. “Did you hear that?”  whispered yogi. It was a mirror. ”Get in here, quick” yelled the mirror. They listened to what the mirror told them. AHH! They were zooming through the school. Suddenly they both realized that they were on a magical pink unicorn. Thump! they landed on the ground of their house. Yay!

They were so happy to be back home and they lived happily ever after.