Learning Journey

Friday, 15 May 2015

Narrative

HUNTED
One night  a full moon  was shimmering like the sun, and there lived a Jungle boy. his tummy was rumbling like the wavy waves crashing in the morning.  *Sniff, Sniff* the Jungle boy could smell something very tasty.  he searched for the tasty smell, running through cages and climbing over boxes. Ya! he was excited when he saw it. he couldn’t wait to get his teeth on that tasty chicken. He was 2 inches away when suddenly…… crash! he landed hard on the floor! “ You are the last one of your kind,” the hunter yelled in victory.  *Click*  the Hunter suddenly blinded the poor boy with the camera flash.  When the poor boy could see again he found himself tied up, upside down.  * Chomp chomp* the hunter was just finishing his tasty chicken, making the boy sad. The hunter held out the white wishbone. “This could be your lucky day,” said the hunter. *Snap* the boy grabbed half of the white bone and won. The Hunter walked back to his hut. The boy used the wishbone to carefully unlocked the padlock. *Thump* the Hunter hit the floor when he realised what was going on. “Come here!”  Yelled the Hunter. He started chasing the boy like a fat gorilla. The boy came to the hole and was trapped. Then he had an idea. He quickly grabbed the camera flash and blinded the hunted. *click* the Hunter was blinded for 5 seconds. Rah! the boy was running hard out. He ran through the cage and waited. *dong* The fat hunter hit the cage bar and was knocked out. The next day the man woke up finding himself high up in a trap. The boy and his army were dancing and singing below him. The
jungle boy and his army lived happily ever after.

4 comments:

  1. It is cool and swag!

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  2. It's really cool jess I love it💓willow

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  3. Thx willow I love nice comments. LOL Jess:)

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  4. Thx willow I love nice comments. LOL Jess:)

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