Leaves
The huge deciduous tree is a shape of a person’s body. It stood alone on the grass. It was as sad as a baby crying. The deciduous tree branches are like a wriggly octopus tentacles. Deciduous leaves are the shape of a bright shiny yellow star. Ever green leaves are like a shape of a fishing knife. Some ever green trees are small and some are big. Some leaves are the colour of my mums lipstick and some are the colour of red wine. Leaves fall down like swishy waves.
Hi Jess
ReplyDeleteI like your simile about the crying baby.
You need to remove the 'a' from your sentence about octopus tentacles.
Maybe you need to learn about how to use apostrophes.