Cameo

This is a example of my writing about adverbs.

Summer

Hhh, Ha Hhh. Slowly I stopped.  I could not stand the heat. My friend and I were on our way to the Taupo Bay dairy in the camp ground. My feet were completely stuck into the ground. Zooming past were cars threatening me. Finally my friend and I were there. Once we put our foot through the gate there were kids surrounding us. We were trapped. We managed to get through. Bravely we arrived at the dairy. Then the lady asked us what we wanted. The presure was on me.  Shyly I answered, “ Can I please have a fruju?” Then my friend ordered. Finally we zoomed out of the shop. Suddenly I remembered that we had to deal with the Kids…. Quickly we ran criss cross back to the camp site. We survived. YAY!