Jump Rope
The nervous feeling inside of me was rumbling for ages. No!! it was my turn. My friends on the other side were cheering and yelling my name. Then we started! The cheering was getting louder. People were bobbing down. Yay I was coming 4th. Suddenly I failed….Nooo! I was disappointed. It came down to the final three. Then a person stopped and then lani stopped. Max was stilling going so he won!! Lani looked disappointed but giggley.
Great story Jessica. It's great that you had such a good time doing your Jump off. Thanks for sharing your story.
ReplyDeleteHi Jess I like your story because it has lots of description. You maybe could of made the writing a different color. Do you think you could of added a picture to brighten it up a bit.
ReplyDeleteHI jess liked your story and you had description you self.
ReplyDeleteI think at the started you could of talked about what happened at the start.
And as Georgia said you could of put a picture in it to
Well i can not actually get one, because there is none of us skipping!
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