Last week was Greats and Grands day. It was an amazing day. My whole class wrote about our Grandparents. We used Revision Assistant to fix our writing. Here it is.
“Hurray!! It’s Friday morning!”I yelled. Me, Olivia, Todd, and Kate were going to the movies with my gran in Kerikeri! I was super excited. My gran picked us up at our house at 9:30 and off we zoomed).
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It took us 20 minutes to drive to Kerikeri from our house. We all had a great talk in the car. Finally, after 20 minutes, we arrived at the movie cinemas in Kerikeri. We got out of the car as quick as Usain Bolt. I jumped over the lines by the pedestrian crossing. We walked through the door and got our tickets. My gran kindly offered to buy us something We all answered, “ No thanks”.
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We sat in the movie seats and waited and waited. Finally, they turned on the movies. It took ages for the ads to finish. The movie was really good! It was about a boy who gets lost in the woods. He finds a green,hairy dragon. His name is Elliot. My Gran said it was one of the best movies ever.
Afterwards, we drove to the Bake house. My gran is really nice and she asked if we would like to have food. Heaps of food. Of course I wanted food! I love Food!! It is like I am in paradise when I am with food. I had a sausage roll and a sparkling OH! And it tasted GREAT!!! It was as yum as chocolate cake.
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We ended the day at Makana Chocolate Factory! We had little chocolate boxes each. Man, our Gran is really generous.
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