This week for our writing we have been focusing on the five senses: Taste, smell, touch, hear, and sight. So in our small buddy groups we had been given a picture and we had to describe the picture using the 5 senses. Later on we had been given a choice between 5 pictures write about. This is my story. See if you can spot the 5 senses.
Soft, delicate sand brushes against my warm feet as I walk towards the glistening ocean. Cold sea water gulps into my mouth making me wince. Island trees wave and sing over the green tropical forest. Fruit and leaves alert my nose making me hungry. Big clumps of waves jumping over my soul. A rush of ocean water rustling, kicking me to the surface. The sun blinding my eyes as I rise to my feet making me blink. Quickly planting myself into the sand not making one little move. 
Kia ora Jess,
ReplyDeleteThat beach looks very inviting - I think I'd like to go there. I particularly like your description of the trees waving and singing.
Miss M