My first narrative

                                Holiday Nightmare

                                              

Once there lived two young bears. One was called Yogi and the other named Lisa. They lived happy together.

They were extremely excited……. as they were about to go on their BIG JOURNEY.  “Come on Yogi” shouted Lisa bear.

Vroom! Off they zoomed on the Air New Zealand plane. Suddenly the plane started rocking like a toy horse.

Ahh!!! Yogi bear and Lisa fell from the plane!

Thump! Suddenly Yogi bear and Lisa bear were lying on the hot sand. They looked around and noticed they were on an island. It looked very swampy. They tried hunting for food but all the could find was….fish.

Rumble!! Rumble!! Yogi bear and Lisa bear tried searching for the sound of the Rumble. Finally they found it. Ahh! they were doomed because it was a VOLCANO. They ran as fast as they could to get away from it. Behind the great big volcano was a whole lot of wooden tree houses. They were the size of a classroom. Later that day they made a perfect home in one of them.

Ahh! Little pieces of lava rock were coming out of the VOLCANO. Suddenly a lot of BIG FIREBALLS came racing out of the volcano. “Come here Lisa. Come here Yogi” echoed in the air. “Did you hear that?”  whispered yogi. It was a mirror. ”Get in here, quick” yelled the mirror. They listened to what the mirror told them. AHH! They were zooming through the school. Suddenly they both realized that they were on a magical pink unicorn. Thump! they landed on the ground of their house. Yay!

They were so happy to be back home and they lived happily ever after.